The original post: /r/eroticliterature by /u/thrashcountant on 2024-10-03 08:36:16.

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Hello all, I’ve decided to try my hand at writing erotica. I’m very engaged with r/erotichypnosis reddit, and i figured I’d share my 2nd creation with this subreddit. It is intended to have elements of femdom and erotic hypnosis (and variants). I posted /deleted previously twice due to tagging issues to comply with the rules here (I’m new to this subreddit). I think I got it right this time, apologies for the inconvenience there.

Special thanks to u/takemetoerotica as my source of inspiration, if you haven’t seen or heard of her works, you should check out her content. Lately, I grew tired of my go to site (mcstories) as there seems to be a lack of what I enjoy, so i decided to do this. I wanted to for a long while. Without further ado, I give you the Prologue and Chapters 1 & 2:

Prologue

Three years ago, I narrowly escaped certain death from an enchantress. All because I stumbled upon some emerald. What it was I didn’t know, I kept it in a safe which apparently lured this enchantress to my home. What I thought was a crazed up pyscho having it out for me was simply a larceny. I woke up in a hospital in very critical condition with four broken ribs along with other fatal wounds. When I told authorites of it while under hospital care, I left out the spell weaving and magic details. Who would believe me? How I survived is beyond me, guess someone or something determined my time wasn’t then. As I recovered and was released from hospital care, I lived my normal life to a point. My thirst for vengeance grew.

Everyday since then, I re-trained myself in martial arts, lifted weights, exercised, and changed my normal diet. My physical appearance changed drastically; I was buff, my dark hair was long, and my goatee changed into a full grown beard from lack of grooming. I eventually quit my job (I was wealthy enough to do so), invested in weaponry, modded my '05 GTO with an on-road arsenal / aftermarket parts, and invested in flame-resistant Kevlar garments. If there was one magic being, there were more in this world. I spent my new life seeking to find her; what seemed like a shot in a million as months passed resulted in me coming across many supernatural beings… vampires, demons, werewolves, you name it.

I found a minion of hers. This human minion begged me to spare him and gave me her location…Veros. Anybody in association with this bitch will be shown no mercy. The time has come to exact my vengeance.

Chapter 1 - The Town of Feminity

After nearly 10 days on the road, I made my way to Veros…the enchantress’s stronghold location. Nothing seems obscure here at all glance. There’s a gas station ahead, I should really get a quick bite and fill my GTO. Out of my car after a four hour drive, feels good to finally stretch. Opening the door into the mart, there are four aisles of your typical convenience store, store brand pre-packaged food against the wall, and at the counter grill rollers of hot dogs, taquitos, etc. Three taquitos, a gatorade, and an orange…that will do it for me. Making my way to the cashier to pay for my lunch, she gave me an unusual look. While she’s singing me up, i being talking with her

“Hi, how are you?”

“Fine, what brings you into town?” She responds.

“Business, I’m trying to meet someone.” Responding and hiding my real intent.

“You do realize where you are, right?” She asks.

“I know nothing about it, but I know I’m in the Borough of Veros”. Replying with a perplexed voice.

“Your kind is scarce.” She says.

“What do you mean.” I’m inquiring. “We’re both humans, or am I missing something?”

“That we are; what I’m saying is that there aren’t many males. About five years ago, there’s been a disappearance of them. Can’t say you won’t be next.” She indicates with hinting inevitablilty.

“What do you know about these disappearances?” Inquiring further.

“Not much. Ever since the castle which was erected about 20 miles from here near a forest, disappearances of males occurred. At the time, some went to dispatch an evil which settled here, they were never seen again. Essentially, you’re in a town where females reside; they’ve taken safe haven here. Either all divorced or are female marriages / relationships.” She explains to me

“What about local authorities?” Inquiring even further.

“A revolving door, zero stability in terms of personnel.” She states with disappointment. " On a plus side, crime is minimal aside from the disappearances." She admits with a positive attitude finally.

“Interesting, thanks for the info”.

The cashier gave me a pinpoint location of the disappearances, I knew where I had to go to. While refueling my car, I’m taking bites of me taquitos amd sips of my gatorade. I dont care what anybody says, gas station or frozen food…I love me a good taquito. Back on the road, driving into residential areas, the cashier wasn’t kidding…mostly females. The destination was approximately 45 minutes according to my GPS.

Continuing my drive on a freeway, at least the scenery here was beautiful. It’s fall currently, so lots of trees with their leaves turning amber or crimson. Passing through a bridge, the waters here looked beautiful, you could clearly see a blueish hue. Shame this town has problems, looks like a nice place to dwell. Not to mention the housing from the outside looks nice. Guess some of the locals here are living well. My exit off the freeway is approaching, so I ramp off, and begun to find myself in an abandoned area. Yeah…this doesn’t seem suspicious at all. I stopped my car as close as I could get and found myself near a very woodsy area. Time to gear up.

Chapter 2 -Forest of Seduction

Shifting my car to park, I went to my trunk and opened it. Let’s see…long machete definitely, Kevlar a must, knives absolutely, shotgun and ammo belt, grenade belt, and pistol with silver bullets. I’d say I’m equipped for the job. Entering the forest, I was immediately greeted with a group of people. Heh, a welcoming party with a woman tied up against a tree. This should be fun.

“Well, well, well…what oh what do we have here? A hunter who thinksss he is going to go after The Queen. You should turn back now while you still can.” Said a male with hissing.

With the biggest smirk on my face and sarcasm “Do you know how I like my vampires???”.

“Krrrriiiissssssspppppyyyyy”. Imitating Dan Forden from Mortal Kombat games

Readying a grenade from my belt, I throw it at the gang of vampires. As soon as it exploded, a smokescreen of dirt filled the air. Not even giving them a chance to recover, I rush over to them and begin slicing their heads off one by one.

“All too easy”.

Ok, now for the woman who’s held captive…making my way to the woman, I cut her ropes loose. She was unconscious, so I kneel down holding her. Opening my bottle of water, I put it on her face and in her mouth. She coughed and awakened.

"Are you alright? what happened?

She looks at me with this devious smile, hugs me tight, and kisses me on the lips. I push her off of me and continue walking. Fuck…it was a trap. I start to feel weird. My vision was off and my ears kept hearing soothing voices and laughs. I was seeing six women or was it less…more?

Blacked out, I find myself tied by vines spread eagle, and secured. Regaining consciousness, I realized I’m half naked with my Kevlar armor off, the three (confirmed) women were forest nymphs. Two of which were laying on both sides of my chest, completely naked. I trying to move and break free…nope thats not happening, hardly a shift on my body. My head wasn’t bound.The third was in between my legs.

“Ahhhh…he’s awake and much sooner then I expected. You haven’t been a warrior very long have you? Seeing your current position, you made a rookie mistake.” The third nymph says seductively.

“Yeah, I should have known the whole kidnapped girl thing was fairy tale. Cut to the chase what are you going to do with me?” I reply angrily.

“Well my lucky friend, I’m Iris. Me and my counter parts are going to toy with you and make you our plaything. To be honest, I thought my minion vampires would take care of you, but seeing that I no longer have my own servants, you’ll make a great replacement.” Iris mockingly replied. “Let’s have fun with him.”

The other two nymphs started kissing all over my body. The kisses are numbing my body; not like the vines didn’t already have me. I keep trying to break free with my limbs and head. Iris walked over to my face with a huge grin.

“Honey, you need to relax…here let me help you.”

She kisses her hand and blows some dust in my face. I’m holding my breath, and stop struggling so I could continue to hold it longer.

“Hahahahaha, nice try but you can’t hold your breath forever, Warrior”. Iris says evily.

She’s right, hate to admit it. The pheromones she blowing at me make their way into my respiratory system. My resistance stopping. I begin to feel a sensation of highness from her intoxicating pheromones. They’re altering my mind, making me want all three of them sexually. The other two nymphs kissing all over my limbs now, I couldn’t move, and don’t want to. I’m getting seriously aroused by this. My face gives off such a delighted smile to them showing my enjoyment. Iris is now whispering seductive and inaudible things in my ears, causing tingles to travel from my head, through my spine. The tingles leading dow…

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